Amaranthe

posted 11th Oct 2019, 6:30 PM

Amaranthe
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11th Oct 2019, 6:30 PM

GeeTee

And here is Amaranthe the lovable rascal!

Anywho, thats all for now. I'll add more in later chapters. Also, I'll come back and edit these as the story progresses. Relationships change after all ;3

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11th Oct 2019, 11:22 PM

Fafhred

Should not be a second 'a' in 'a true born a succubus' ;-)

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12th Oct 2019, 3:55 AM

ShoShone

Not quite.

I see you're still having trouble comprehending English, the finer points, finesse and grammar.

She actually meant to say, "and truly born a succubus." LOL

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12th Oct 2019, 8:23 AM

GeeTee

Nono, hes right, that was a typo x.x

I went ahead and fixed it

I have this really cool keyboard. A Corsair K70 with Cherry MX Silver switches. the keys on it are super sensitive so typos happen alot, and I'm not very good at proofreading my own work XD

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12th Oct 2019, 11:11 AM

ShoShone

Oh, well, there goes that gag ruined.


I wanted too see what sort of silly ranting the guy would do while "correcting" me. But you missed the message asking you not to let on.

A lot of times you're occupied elsewhere. I wasn't sure this was gonna be one of those times. Dammit.

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